Self Evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

- I think i should get 1 point.

2) What did you do well?
I think my narration was enough to explain about resident registration number. 
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3) What could you have done better?
At first I think my introduction enough to attract people and explain what i will talk about. However, when i read again, i found that discovery of contents are so fast. I think i can write better introduction if i modify introduction.


I think the narration was the best classical argument that i used. I explain the history of the resident register number in narration. I think it acts good 

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I think confirmation and refutation need to support more.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

iI think i need to support confirmation and refutation.