Intro

1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.

We live on information-originated society. Can you make a rough estimate how much information on the internet? According to Andy Greenhaw, who is digital strategist, 1.2 zettabytes(1.3 trillion gigabytes) is now stored in cyberspace. Because of these much information, we can easily approach to them and get information. However, can we say that it is just good? As growing amount of information, many problems are also emerged. Among many problems, leakage of resident registration number is serious. These days there is a debate about collecting resident registration number. Resident registration number is very important and private information. However, this secret information wanders on the internet and open to other people. To prevent more serious problem, resident registration number should not be collected on the internet.

1. Attracts the audience - I displayed the accurate information and throw a question to readers.
2. Explains the topic. - By explaining the seriousness of problem, i emphasize my argument.
3. Declares the thesis of your argument. - I suggest my argument directly at the end.

Reference

https://andygreenhaw.wordpress.com/tag/amount-of-online-information/