2014년 10월 26일 일요일

The confirmation


1. What is my thesis?
To prevent more serious problem, resident registration number should not be collected on the internet.


2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
I'll mainly use examples that will emphasize the necessity of regulation. Some experiments, and statistics will be used. I'll mainly use examples, explanation, and statistics that will emphasize the damages for collecting resident registration number.


3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are mostly based on evidence that shows the need that collecting resident registration number should be banned. 


Confirmation

When we sign in some internet sites, we need several private information such as name, birthday, e-mail address and so on. All of information are sensitive, however, among them resident registration number is may be the most sensitive information because it contains so much information about us. Resident registration number contains our birth place, birth day, gender etc. Therefore many people are sensitive and want to protect their number. However, these days, this important information of us is floating on the internet because of leakage of resident registration number. Think about people who you don't know already know your number even don't know who you are. Also your number can be used anywhere by people who know your resident registration number. It can become very serious problem. There are already several leakages of the number. To prevent these problems, resident registration number should not be collected on the internet. Companies or people who require resident registration number usually say they need the number because they need to recognize and distinguish people. However, because of leakage of the number, resident registration number loses its value. Because of leakage of the number, many people can know other people's numbers also there are some dealings to sell and buy others resident registration number. Therefore, we can use other people's number when we sign in some sites, credit card, even can use bad ways. Can we really say resident registration number has its value to recognize individuals? The number lose its value and reliability. 

Also these leakages cause too many problems and make too many damages. As mentioned earlier, we can use other people's number for bad ways. Therefore someone can get damaged like pay money involuntarily or get tickets for illegal behaviors that we didn't do.

 Many people say resident registration numbers are needed to recognize individuals, however, the numbers are not only thing to distinguish people. For examples, go to bank and make your own account right now. We don't need our resident registration number to make own account. Only things we need to write are name, birthday, address, job, telephone number, home number etc. Without resident registration number, and with these information, bank can recognize us. This is why foreign banks are well going on where there are no resident registration number and Korea bank can make accounts for foreigners. Moreover, there is the alternative of resident registration number. It is My-PIN. My-PIN is the number that consists of 13-digit number for unprescribed. People can get the number through the internet site or dong office. We can us the number when we are issued membership card, talk to ARS, or book lental etc.

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